In all of my essays, there have been a notable number of grammatical errors. For example, in a QLP assignment titled “Perfect Mates,” I wrote the sentence “One group focused on feminine traits while the other group focused on masculine traits.” This is actually a recurring phrase. In my revision, I corrected this sentence by placing a period after "feminine traits", removing the word while and capitalizing it immediately after. This created two separate sentences from the previous run-on